Loos like a good start.

For me I might drop the name in the logo and just go for a logo, mainly as it looks a bit too busy with the name in there, it also makes it a bit hard to read, maybe its the transparance on the material??

For me if your going for the name to be in there I would break it up into and give the name more space so that it's the main focus to the viewer.

Just some thoughts.