Nice going on the site Laurie, looks nice so far...

Crits would be,

On the front page, you may need to reword the first paragraph intro i think. It sounds a bit odd when it just says, "I live in London". Maybe try kick in at the start of the sentence as, "Currently living in London and have graduated with a ETC".

Another thing with the CV is, you sure you want to state your exact address in there? you never know but there are pyscho's out there I would have gone with saying, suburb/city. Up to you though man...

And also you might want to post up a bit more work i think.


Anyways, i hope this helped abit. Cheeeeeeers.

- Marlon