Thanks again for the advice everyone has given me! Made some major changes and wanted to get an opinion if I'm getting a better overall look before I move on to the few other things I want to add.

Instead of going for a 'carrying everything and the kitchen sink look' I'm trying something simpler. The padded kevlarish type shirt will have a lot more detail added when moved to the texture phase. Also I'll add in hair and I still want to use goggles but I'll have them on his forehead instead of covering his face. So he doesn't have his eyes covered.