Cheers for the crits and words guys,

It is a wip but is also a test for a poss job. Unfortunately I have had to do this in a short ammount of time due to other work to pay bills etc now I am back in the UK. As you stated Honest it could easily be a lot better and really needs more time spent on it but unfortunately it is time I do not have. Will have the final animation etc done early evening today and will then send it off. I may well go back to this though and try to get it looking decent if it fails the test.

Cheers for the more detailed crit though Honest, I always appretiate people taking the time to help me improve my work and hope to come back to this in order to get it looking good.

Cheers chilledoutredhead will stick a link up here once I have it uploaded