hey nice so far.
i looked at the camera move. not sure i get it. its pretty horrible tbh. is that what it does in the film? surely its just a drift or something.
one thing the camera move was good for was seeing the proportions of things in your scene. I imagine the using the right camera helped loads! it looks good now.
What focal length did you end up with? i assume you are using 35mm academy filmback.