it's looking good, the only comment I would make is that your mesh is looking quite heavy in terms of polys. Especially on the wings and the part that runs through the head past the eyes. You could represent that same detail with less polys (which will be better for you when you come to texturing it)
It's an excellent start though and if it only took one nite then that's even better! 
Alan
Technical Director - Framestore
Currently working on: Your Highness
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