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# 1 15-06-2008 , 08:01 AM

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this been a longtime ,hope all the community is fine,any comment is welcome.
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https://www.badongo.com/vid/689232
https://www.badongo.com/vid/689342
https://www.badongo.com/vid/689354
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# 2 15-06-2008 , 11:13 AM

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I've only had a quick look at the first image. It's ok, but it still needs quite a bit of work.

the textures are too clean, they repeat too much and also the carpet texture is too blurry - i think the resolution is too low.

also the perspective of the background image makes absolutely no sense with the room - it looks like the room is tilted towards the viewer - or the skyscrapers are falling over. If you composite images you have to make sure that they make sense or it just looks silly - you need to find a background image which fits in with the perspective of your room.

lastly, it's not really a saloon, which is a type of bar. it looks more like a living room.

sorry for the heavy crit. just pointing out what stands out to me.

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# 3 15-06-2008 , 11:29 AM

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hi
dont be sorry,it s your opinion .and i agree, in any way i v to make it better next time.
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# 4 15-06-2008 , 02:38 PM

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I think the GI settings need to be adjusted, you can see some blotchiness along the top of the walls. The refractive index on the glass vases seem a little too high. Something else that stood out to me was whats going on below the coffee table.

I'm no expert but the first 2 animations kinda just scrambled out in one big puff, not very natural looking. The third one wouldn't play for me. Keep truckin.

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