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Introduction to Maya - Modeling Fundamentals Vol 2

This course will look in the fundamentals of modeling in Maya with an emphasis on creating good topology. It's aimed at people that have some modeling experience in Maya but are having trouble with complex objects.

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# 1 19-07-2006 , 11:54 PM

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Hi Guys Please give some productive critic on this one

(keeping in mind it´s my first ~finished project

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# 2 20-07-2006 , 12:23 AM

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hmm gif dont look that good, so i´ve made a jpg in .rar

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# 3 20-07-2006 , 07:02 AM

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looks pretty nice
only it looks like the sun/star isn't looking complete round?
or is that just me

------------------- WIP ------------------

--------------- Finished Work -------------
Apache Helicopter
Armoured Personal Unit
Apache Finished
Ferrari 360
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# 4 20-07-2006 , 10:57 AM

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well. It is a sphere, that iv´e just maked some noise on, so it should be user added image

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# 5 20-07-2006 , 11:18 AM

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Good First Attempt.

Color of the sun seems a bit off to me maybe that's giving the effect of it being slightly non circular, could be the noise too. Did you use a RAMP Shader? For me I would have and put the colors to orange, yellow and then black.

Maybe some subtle effects off of the surface of the sun to create the constant flares, and a lens flare. Just ideas...

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