it's bent out and repositioned to burn ants and possibly the track next to him.
I agree, if you're going for a mirror, the only thing this guy's gonna see is his own eye. It's gotta be farther out like those on bicycle helmets. Otherwise maybe it's a magnifier? I think more than anything that might just become disorienting.
the scene is coming along, but I think you could push the camera angle further. I'd come even farther down onto the track and try to shove the main bobsled to our left or crop in about an inch or so to avoid the dead space. the top right bobsled is a little awkward because we're seeing almost a top view and there's a lot of dead space between our 'hero' bobsled and the losing bobsled. We wouldn't even see the driver.
Anyway, I think this piece will get a lot of life once you get to the motion blur, some ice shavings flying off to the side of these blazing sleds, and some depth of field.
haha, so ditch the eye thing? done. Funky, ill be taking your advice for the camera! trying to get another render up as soon as i finish the hands!
Thanks for the help, is this any better?
thanks mirek, but what does previs and impro mean?
heres an update, still have to work on the hands (their 4 fingered hands) and finished the gun. alot of work to do but a basic image! https://img146.imageshack.us/img146/7...er6copywr8.jpg
Yay, not a freshman anymore!
Last edited by kinddoggofwar; 27-12-2007 at 09:41 AM.
previz..,= previsulisation.., something i think you do naturally.., when you look at a referance picture/s and then draw up a scene or story board to guide the project
impro.., =improvisation.., =on the spot, no plan, do it as it comes.., ect
Joopson, im not using an HDR, i do however have Env Chrome, not sure if that would give it that effect, but i cant think of anything else it could be.
I think im doing more of an impro, with minor previz. Im mainly using a try try and try again technique!
Thanks for the comments, ill post updates soon!
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