looks like a good start dave...I agree with Miss_Nova....the knuckles need adjusting and then you will have it close...use your own hand as a ref....it is quite suprising how your knuckles are displaced from each other!!
keep it up mate you are doing well on a difficult subject
cheers bullet
bullet1968
"A Darkness at Sethanon", a book I aspire to model some of the charcters and scenes