Over all not to bad.... One thing that pops out a bit is his knee's pop a little funny when steping down you can try and fix that by not having his body raise up as far when he goes to step. That should help wiht the knee area adn just drop him down a bit more after he step to keep the up down motion..
You can also try and add a bit more rotation in his hips and a bit more sway left to right.
Great start keep going..
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