here is my new wip for a future project.i took me about 5 day to do that.i know its a bit long but when its your first body and you dont really know where to start it can be pretty hard
iam pretty proud of that.i hope will like it too.the head is done , i will probably post it later.i dont think i will model the leg cuz i think they wont be useful for my prject.

c$c are welcome

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why theres always those lame polls...

ppl will just tell u what they think if i ask 4 C&C..

it look ok. too many hard creases in my opinion.
but the proportions are ok

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thanx for the comment .can you post a picture where you draw the error you see on my picture.

hey mcfleury,
I think your body is looking great. The hard lines he is referring too may be around the forearm, elbow, and clav. At least those are the ones that stick out to me the most. Very nice detail by the way. Some of the lines may be a little hard but the muscle structure is definately very nice.
Cheers,
Penguin

I think your trapezius maximus is too narrow and under-defined(should be more triangular).
The rear of the shoulder is too long or lacking definition as well, it should really have an indent with the arm in that position.

Other than that its a very nice model for your first body

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Hi. Looks nice. But I think you got a bit off with modeling the back and the elbows.

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hey man nice job on the body, one of these days I will crawl out of my shell and try and create a body, for now I will just stick with some more tutorials and maybe work on some more on my hotrod stage coach LOL. Great work!!

Leland Webb

Webb Creative Arts

thanx a lot for all these comment i will try to correct the hard edges.thanx to correct my mistakes.

for the back correction, i dont really understand what is wrong with my back i know for the elbow but not for the back.

maybe i will show you the head today.

here is the head i did for that body.i know the wire is not that good, it really need some tweaking and i cant get rid of that thing in the middle of his forhead.i didnt do the hear but it will come.

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