hi everyone!

im working on a girl... 20-30.

I have some huge problem that i cant solve myself.
My biggest problem is the nose... well the whole face is
my problem :headbang:

dont look at the hands and feets because in this stage i
dont care about them.

anyway, as you can see there is some parts that is very wrong
i hope you guys can help me to fix them

thanks!

Attached Thumbnails

the head

Attached Thumbnails

pretty good... some pointers: the nose ridge is too edgy, and the corner of the mouth needs some work. In the corner the lips shouldn't go out.

thanks alot DJbLAZER :p

I will make a new try on the nose and lips.

nice with someone from sweden :bow:

here some small changes. i dont think im understand about the nose.

Attached Thumbnails

At first glance i'd say the eye positions look a little off. I get the impression that they are a little high on the head.

It might be an idea to block in the ears and see if that balances the face up a bit.

---

Examples of bTraffic - a traffic animation tool for Maya
bFlocking - a tool for Maya 8.5+ to generate flocking and swarming behaviours
Jan/Feb Challenge 2007 Entry and W.I.P
May/Jun Challenge 2006 Entry and W.I.P
Mar/Apr Challenge 2006 Entry and W.I.P
Jan/Feb Challenge 2006 Entry and W.I.P
Nov/Dec Challenge 2005 Entry and W.I.P
Sep/Oct Challenge 2005 Entry and W.I.P
Jul/Aug Challenge 2005 Entry
www.flash-fx.net

Arms look rather short.

---

I'm not a geek. I'm a nerd.

msn - g1842@hotmail.com
I'm up for a chat anytime.

here is the wire

Attached Images

might not help but the edge around the eye looks a little stuck out. Here's a quick eraser job on the pic to see what I mean (if you compare it to the previous wireframe.
Not perfect but just as an example.

Attached Images

---

Examples of bTraffic - a traffic animation tool for Maya
bFlocking - a tool for Maya 8.5+ to generate flocking and swarming behaviours
Jan/Feb Challenge 2007 Entry and W.I.P
May/Jun Challenge 2006 Entry and W.I.P
Mar/Apr Challenge 2006 Entry and W.I.P
Jan/Feb Challenge 2006 Entry and W.I.P
Nov/Dec Challenge 2005 Entry and W.I.P
Sep/Oct Challenge 2005 Entry and W.I.P
Jul/Aug Challenge 2005 Entry
www.flash-fx.net

thanks alot t1ck135 and gohan1842! :attn:

but I dont see what i mean with the eye.
I post a bigger pic on the eye and with the ear.

(its not mine ear, just wanna see how its look)

Attached Thumbnails

here is the a subd version

Attached Thumbnails

I should have said around the cheek and eyebrow near the eye

Nice edgeloops by the way

This is the area that looks a little out if it makes sense on the piccy.

Attached Images

---

Examples of bTraffic - a traffic animation tool for Maya
bFlocking - a tool for Maya 8.5+ to generate flocking and swarming behaviours
Jan/Feb Challenge 2007 Entry and W.I.P
May/Jun Challenge 2006 Entry and W.I.P
Mar/Apr Challenge 2006 Entry and W.I.P
Jan/Feb Challenge 2006 Entry and W.I.P
Nov/Dec Challenge 2005 Entry and W.I.P
Sep/Oct Challenge 2005 Entry and W.I.P
Jul/Aug Challenge 2005 Entry
www.flash-fx.net

can you show the reference pic you use for her?

Did someone tear out her spine? It curves inward a bit too much...

---

Live the life you love, love the life you live

I dont feel you're looking at any reference for this otherwise the proportion would be better. The arms are very short, the back is too curved, there is no rib cage behind the breasts and the head is too long , also the nose is too bulb like make it more 'pixie ish'

My advice would be to start on the head first and get that right. Find some good references, theres plenty about and if you are stuck then Im sure we can sort that out for you.

Ive tinkered a little on the head to get you started.

Best of luck

Jay

Attached Thumbnails