Hi JosiahBrooks,
That's looking pretty good for a rookie. You're learning quite well. I think character modeling may very well end up being one of your main strengths. One thing that really jumped out at me was the uv layout...the colored one. The face, to me, looks like it has lots of character. Perhaps your next model you could make a heavier set character with a head that looks like the head in your uv layout. I think it would be interesting if done right.
Good job so far on your current model! Looking foward to seeing how your skills and talent develop in time.
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