HEY FOLKS

This is me trying to make a whole animated short

Jay allready helped me alot AND once more huge huge thnx from my side...

So here i start my W.I.P thread ... :



If there are questions to the plot just ask

character:
he´s is a middel aged physics professor .....



first looks to the apartment :





right now iam working on the aparment then i will go back rigging the character....

Comments and critics are very welcome

soon more !!

holla

i love the idea its great i think you should condense your apartment it's looking very open and kinda empty but this could be because it isn't finished.

Good luck with it all

Hey anasasis..

its definitly true the apartment is still to open and AND kinda empty.. but as u recognized iam still working on that and there still alot modeling to do

Hopefully there will be more stuff in the apartment by the end of the day


l8r

very interesting looking good so far.

Only thing I noticed that needs to be fixed is in your description, under PLOT, you have "....mechanism to shot himself..." should be "....mechanism to shoot himself...." don't know if that was a finished part or not but figured I'd point it out in case you didn't notice

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- Mike

https://rhetoriccamel.blogspot.com

Hello Rhetoric Camel,

:blush: i fixed it

thnx !!!

just a lil update..

the render cam has a focal length of 25... (wide)



i think there is enough furniture now... but it still looks too clean...
how would u guys make it more look like somebody lives there?





still some stuff to do:

-> phone (modeling, texturing)
-> answering machine (modeling, texturing)
-> some bottles (modeling, texturing)
-> books (modeling, texturing)
-> DVD Player (texturing)
-> winduptoy (modeling, texturing)
-> robe (modeling, texturing)
-> wedding rings (modeling, texturing)
-> suicide letter

Rigging of dude and winduptoy ...

Animating scenes..

Rendering

DEADLINE 12.06.09 to bad there is no crying smiley

I think it looks unrealistic primary because it's too much open space, nobody arange their furniture like that. Either shrink the room or do some realistic interiour design.

if that's an apartment and he has kids, then shouldn't you have at least 2 bedrooms and a bathroom?

you should add some carpet on some places and maybe dividers if you aren't putting in walls

i don't know about you but the apartment's here are like jail cells, everything is quite tightly packed in (and in most cases jail cells and prisons here are better than the apartments... criminals even gets playstations to play on... go figure...)

the table with the chairs needs to be widened, it looks way too narrow and so does the bookshelf

also, you may want to, at some point, alter your cushions so they look soft... at the moment they look like slates of granite or something

having kids i'd expect there to be toys thrown about or tidied up (more likely thrown around if he's gonna kill himself... i figure the kids are driving him crazy and he can't handle the leaving of his wife?)

i don't think the size is too big, you just have a lot of room left to distribute to the other parts of the apartment

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that's a "Ch" pronounced as a "K"

Computer skills I should have:
Objective C, C#, Java, MEL. Python, C++, XML, JavaScript, XSLT, HTML, SQL, CSS, FXScript, Clips, SOAR, ActionScript, OpenGL, DirectX
Maya, XSI, Photoshop, AfterEffects, Motion, Illustrator, Flash, Swift3D

Hey Guys thanks for ur tips...

I took them under considuration and allready changed the arangement and size of the apartment a bit

modelt a couple toys as well

ill post some new pictures tomorrow...

sorry it took me so long to answer ..