Thanks guys for the comments
GecT I had it all black at one point but found it was even to plane for me. I always try to have my reels simple and to the point will with out a lot of cuts or fancy edits i'll see what i can come up with or change.
Ben, Crits are never bad and im still learning a lot as well.. the sheild lines are actully 3d made in Z brush and applied as a bump map in maya... I can look over the sheild area for when i add new models for sure.
Have lots of new projects on the go..
I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination, knowledge is limited, imagination encircles the world. (Albert Einstein)
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