Please watch and criticize this animation (beginner)
Hello everyone, I am a beginner in maya and I did something that I need you professionals to criticize it so I'd know what to improve on.
I'd really appreciate your honest brutal comments.
Thank you.
Link: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=V1_1F-pGtjo
Here is the old one I did, you can watch and compare my progress if you have the time please : https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=VnOmX4sTYVs
Thanx in advance (I'm sorry if this is not the right room for this kind of things)