runnspaz.zip (123.5 KB, 269 views)
I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination, knowledge is limited, imagination encircles the world. (Albert Einstein)
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10-08-2003
, 03:58 PM
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looks great, only crit would be that he seams not to move up and down enough for running (or maybe it is a problem with my screen :p)
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10-08-2003
, 04:41 PM
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runnspaz2.zip (125.9 KB, 273 views)
I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination, knowledge is limited, imagination encircles the world. (Albert Einstein)
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10-08-2003
, 04:54 PM
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that is better now 
you want more things you can improve? the shoulder turns nicely and i like how he opens and closes the fingers a bit. but the hip does not turn/twist - so it looks like he is running, but not covering as much distance as he should. and something not right with the legs - the flip a bit when they go forward. maybe you should leave them in front position a bit bended and have them i the middle then they go back straight.
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