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# 1 17-09-2003 , 04:24 AM

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Hello, well, here I am again asking for some critique (again). This is a model I made of myself, ok, maybe a little extra here and there. I am going to use it for promotional purposes and could do with some more eyes on it before I take it further. Thanks.

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# 2 17-09-2003 , 05:14 AM

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this is rocking yo,.

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# 3 17-09-2003 , 05:31 AM

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LOL. That is so cool. You should most definitely post a 3/4 shot and profile. This is 3d after all user added image

The model is looking very nice. More please

C+C

the knee looks sharp? Its the light falling on it but the edge/seam is very evident

Skin texture isn't quite right, bit lamberty at the moment. Maybe try using a skin shader you download off HIGHEND3d.com.

The head area under the cap seems to have some odd thing happening; is that a shadow? (AH.. eyebrows?)

Since its toony, maybe try making the hands a bit bigger. They look kind of unbalanced compared to the shoe size

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# 4 17-09-2003 , 03:41 PM

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Thanks guys. I took your advice GreenGiant and fixed the hands, pant and skin texture, you were right! user added image

Here is the new me.

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# 5 25-09-2003 , 04:09 AM

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More Me Model

Back again. Mainly finished. Thanks for the previous critique guys! Would like some more on the new and improved still. Thanks! Oh, yeah I'm looking for a full-time job, can you tell??

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# 6 25-09-2003 , 09:43 AM

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haha , thats very nice user added image

i like it

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# 7 25-09-2003 , 04:33 PM

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funny image

hehe this last picture i crazy funny i like!
so just make your own body more human...
proportions are cool comic style but woman body has mutch more roundness and knees are to spiky...

the clothes of this creepy monster in background is great!!!

cool user added image

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# 8 25-09-2003 , 04:38 PM

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dame u got a big head user added image

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# 9 25-09-2003 , 05:01 PM

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Otaku, thank you. But unfortunately I'm a mal-nutrtitioned computer geek that also so happens to be British (the brits have no bums especially not round ones anyway).

Traveler, lots of head talk today, must be something in the air... user added image

hihi.

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# 10 25-09-2003 , 05:21 PM

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(the brits have no bums especially not round ones anyway).

I beg to differ, my arse is lovely user added image

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# 11 25-09-2003 , 05:31 PM

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hihiii

thats funny!
here in my city girls are having round nice **** .

air? but there (UK) is the most bautyful on this planet --> the sea ^_^

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# 12 25-09-2003 , 05:32 PM

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I really like that snail can we get some more shots of him/ her? Super expression.

The main character is good too, I like the pose although perhaps have her look more at the camera in that 'desiring a job' way 8).

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# 13 25-09-2003 , 05:45 PM

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Icarus....don't believe you, prove it user added image

hihi

Witchy, I actually did have her looking at the camera to begin with, but I opted to have her staring out into space, waiting and waiting and waiting..... I am attaching turbosnail for you.

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