M41-A Pulse Rifle

# 1 30-08-2011 , 10:01 AM

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Hello there.

So, I've made this Pulse Rifle lately.
I know that it is far from perfect. It has some minor bugs here and there and topology is a mess in some places.

Low Poly was around 15k tris and the one on renders is about 63k + smooth preview

Just wanted to know what you guys think about it.
I think my skills have improved a little bit since my MAC 10 model user added image

Oh, and it will be textured by a friend o mine in about 2 weeks or something.

So, let me know what you think, any advice how to improve etc any CC appreciated

Cheers!

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# 2 30-08-2011 , 10:13 AM

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Looking good and wire shots...........dave

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# 3 30-08-2011 , 10:31 AM

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thanks Dave.

EDIT: Added some wires

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# 4 30-08-2011 , 12:35 PM

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Good job! I love modelling weapons, it massages my OCD of having to snap every vertex to another vertex so everything is tidy and symmetrical. Lovin' the chunkyness of it too, the front-end looks like it'll be pumping out some HUGE rounds. Keep it up!

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# 5 31-08-2011 , 02:31 AM

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Nice one mate!!! HAS to be the BEST sounding rifle...LOL just love it. I bought the game just so I could hear the rifle...bahahaha...love it. Well done

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# 6 31-08-2011 , 05:16 AM

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LOL I couldnt resist in my lunchbreak...was a bit hard to see as the light bounces off the screen here in the site office...good fun though.

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https://dl.dropbox.com/u/4090628/Pulse_Rifle.wmv

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# 7 31-08-2011 , 06:40 AM

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thanks guys.
and lol Bullet, thanks for reminding me how it sounds user added image

sounds pretty awesome, yea user added image

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# 8 31-08-2011 , 01:42 PM

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Looks good zeto, I think. My crit would be...it maybe looks a little narrow....width wise? But I made one of these once...and I think I prefer yours .. user added image

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# 9 31-08-2011 , 02:30 PM

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Thanks Ben. I think you're right about it being too narrow. No way I'm not going to fix that now user added image

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# 10 31-08-2011 , 09:38 PM

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I think it realy looks good only little crit would be the pistol grip looks a little to curved. Trying to remember was the large barrel a 20mm grenade launcher. How is the low poly model looking like..........dave

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# 11 01-09-2011 , 04:04 PM

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I didn't save low poly model Dave, sorry. Yea, the grip is a bit more curved than original one but It was like that on the concept art I've been working with. Haven't noticed that to be honest user added image

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