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Introduction to Maya - Modeling Fundamentals Vol 2

This course will look in the fundamentals of modeling in Maya with an emphasis on creating good topology. It's aimed at people that have some modeling experience in Maya but are having trouble with complex objects.

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# 1 10-07-2011 , 08:46 PM

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I did Modeling texturing and lighting.

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# 2 10-07-2011 , 08:54 PM

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I like the over all look of it, could cut back on the occlusion pass and I can see the direct light on the wardrobs witch look good but there is another on the back wall I think dont need that one...........dave

Edit:as a side note you could also brighten up the scene with reflective lighting from the wardrobs and the floor to the back of the ceiling

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# 3 11-07-2011 , 12:25 AM

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Good job, notes really as Dave says. But also try coloring the occlusion instead of the black try saturating it with a similar color to the actual scene

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