Shadeblade, The brother is aiming the flashlight to the bathroon, as he saw soming moving. Without the flashlight you can'y really see the killer. The pictire of Jesus has always been there, well I think I put it there on my 10th render or something. I you go to page 2 or 3 and look closely you will see the picture of Jesus
niasyn, I plan to add much more to the scene such as you listed, and more!
t1ck135, hehehe... that could be it to
Here an update, i'm more plase with the lighting at this point, so now i'm of to bumpmapping!
Oh by the way, I just fix the shadows (using a mental ray area light) and use no FG this time, to give it a darker look.
Ah, okay I see. Well, other than that, I think the floor and bump map look "Simply" awesome. You should start making tutorials I'm sure that they would be hits!
You might want to remove the "forgive me" from the bump map and just make it more of the wall, as right now, the words are slightly bumped out, it seems, which doesn't make that much sense.
you cant really see the blood on the wall... maybe move it up a bit. also I think the chains are a little too distracting. maybe put a rim light to even it out a bit.
awesome,
but just one thing, the guy in the air is dead right?
it looks lika his arms are strugeling to come out of the chains or something, the armes is not straight, and they are not looking dead, Maybe i got it all wrong anyway. NICE WORK!
I think the blood should not cover as much of the floor as it does. Also, about the chains and limp torso that everyone mentions, I think the guy should be hanging a bit more lifelessly. It looks good now, but if you want it to be great, it needs some work.
I have not had much time in the last week, do to relationship problems. So now I have my own place This was a big relationship, as we have a baby together! But sadly I never was in love with her, but I do love her as a person
Anyways, I did a render last night, been doing some different ideas. I am playing around with the lighting using some glow effect. I also change some textures around as well, and moved the camrea
joed8349, i'll see what I can do. I take the brother out for now, as I think the scene looks better. But I may put him back in later, like a from behind view.
mtmckinley, thanks man. I fix bumps
Minstrel, thanks. I fix it
NextDesign, I hope the new camrea view is better for all the chains.
Angalid, thanks. Sam has a hook through the back of his haed, which holds him up
joed8349, thanks. The blood on the floor is less now. Hope you like it better now
Well heres the update. Oh also, I added some DOF as well as FG & GI
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