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14-02-2004
, 06:43 PM
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Much better than I last took a look. Now it has weight!
Noticed one little problem though. His left foot seems to slide just before he does the back flip...
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14-02-2004
, 06:48 PM
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Thanks KB, the left foot dose slide but thats him swinging his foot from the back to get momentume for the flip. The right leg stays plated.
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14-02-2004
, 06:57 PM
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Kurt, that looks great!!
Like Kbrown, I'm not 100% convinced by the anticipation of the somersault. It's a little too long for my tastes.
Is the problem with the left-foot that it is doing two things that are somewhat indistinguishable? The first is coming out of the roundhouse kick, the second is launching the somersault. I feel it may be better if after the roundhouse, the character takes just a moment to compose before the somersault. Maybe have him in give a quick glance to one side or over his shoulder.
That'll do donkey... that'll do...
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14-02-2004
, 08:23 PM
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I'll see what i can do... Ive been watching martial arts comps on tv and their rutines are so fast and smooth in the transitions.Its like they got form on pose to the next wiht out any inbetween.
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14-02-2004
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Gave a bit of a pause on the foot as well as plated it before take off=)
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15-02-2004
, 01:03 AM
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its looking better and better. Sorry I don't have much I can say as this part of things is very new to me. But I’m learning vicariously through your animations and the C+C it brings. good stuff.animations and the C+C it brings. good stuff.
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15-02-2004
, 01:36 AM
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That planted foot makes all the difference!  outstanding!
That'll do donkey... that'll do...
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15-02-2004
, 03:56 AM
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Thanks guys.. still fine tweaking and trying to get the cloth to play nice......
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15-02-2004
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Render test with camera..... Pretty much done still working on cloth but my puter just cant handel the real intense caculation when smoothed
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15-02-2004
, 07:23 PM
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looks great, he's really kicking the crap out of that pole 
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16-02-2004
, 12:20 AM
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great job! ...
but i can't really follow his movements... i think it's too fast... or maybe you should add more frames... or motion blure it or something,... (i really know much about animation... ) 
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17-02-2004
, 04:32 AM
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Great work, very good animation and cool character, its true the animation is kinda fast but it looks very fluid very close to mocap in my opinion
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17-02-2004
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Thanks everyone for the nice comments I'll sttill work on it a bit more before the end=)
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