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Introduction to Maya - Modeling Fundamentals Vol 1

This course will look at the fundamentals of modeling in Maya with an emphasis on creating good topology. We'll look at what makes a good model in Maya and why objects are modeled in the way they are.

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# 1 24-10-2004 , 07:03 PM

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hi to all
this is my recent work
i need your opinion .. please feel free and post your cooments user added image

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# 2 24-10-2004 , 07:09 PM

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here is another one

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# 3 24-10-2004 , 07:21 PM

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Pretty nice work man. I suggest turning down the light intensity a lil though and maybe have the wood not be as glossy.

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# 4 25-10-2004 , 04:45 PM

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Bolt handle seems a little weak, flimsy. Looks like it would just bend/snap off if you tried to use it.

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# 5 27-10-2004 , 09:38 PM

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Although the wood maybe a little to glossy for this. I really like the look you'v got with the shader.

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# 6 28-10-2004 , 09:50 AM

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shadows too dark try and get some colour bleed in there from the surface

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# 7 28-10-2004 , 10:59 PM

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Being a gun man myself.. I'd say he has the wood just right,
Most guns are high gloss finish/varnish when using real woor stocks and or grips, unless the owner specifically goes for a different look..

As well, The vast majority of guns owned by individuals, unless they lack common sence.. will at all times look like they are band new, shiney, oily, glossy.. .. PErsonally i htink its good work myself.. cant say much about the bolt.. cant see it that well myself..

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# 8 28-10-2004 , 11:28 PM

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where does the end of the knife disappear to?

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# 9 31-10-2004 , 08:45 PM

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thanx guys that was really useful

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i will soon post a new pic after i fine tune them

you ppl are great .. lol i knew i wll never be able to observe as you ppl ..
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# 10 23-11-2004 , 11:44 AM

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this is the latest modification i did to my Rifle Scene

do you think it deserv to be posted in a gallary??!!!

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# 11 23-11-2004 , 11:45 AM

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sorry i forgot to post the image

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# 12 25-11-2004 , 05:15 AM

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Turn down the reflectivity/specularity on the gun stock. It's made of wood, not plastic. (or is it.. Hrmmmmm. ) user added image

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# 13 25-11-2004 , 07:26 AM

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Nice looking model, I would agree that it is a bit too shiny and the bolt handle is a bit on the thin side. Also the scope is missing windage and elevation turrents. Looking good thou.

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# 14 27-11-2004 , 11:24 AM

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i dont know wahts the problem here .. i
have been trying to attach my new image here ,, but it says the file size is too big .. and the file size is about 770 KB

lol .. all the comment i am getting ar on my old images

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