This is the basic model... i've just get the legs/ arm longer/shorter... Critics & comments welcome!
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This is the basic model... i've just get the legs/ arm longer/shorter... Critics & comments welcome!
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Nice model. The face looks good, and the body does too. But I think the arms are a bit too long, and the legs are way too short. Also he seems a bit narrow at the hips.
Other than that he's looking good!
So, i would say just work on your proportions. And a bit of anatomy, though at this poly level your not going to need to worry about that too much. Just try and get the proportions and weight down at the mo..... then details.
Also, wire look good too. You might have some problems around the face, as you have a lot of vertical and horizontal edges, and not too many profile edges..... hard to explain, just edges that conform to the masses of the face, like the loops you have around the eyes and mouth. I'm not too sure though. I think yours should be fine.
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There is a bit to touch but it's somehow finished here is the concept and the model. I get a bit out of the concept due to the big hand don't look good @ the model so i think this version is better ... i've cleared all the unnecessery faces C&C welcome.
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p.s everything is symmetrical ... just some bad angles of camera
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like the gnom fellow, i assume you are going to puff the right arm up and shrink the left arm down like in the concept
nice work on the weapon, why is it dark at the top? did you soften the edges? are you goign to give it that flat-ish round-ish panel on the top as well?
i'm impressed you can work with such a small monitor
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Originally posted by Chirone
hey that's pretty cool
like the gnom fellow, i assume you are going to puff the right arm up and shrink the left arm down like in the concept
nice work on the weapon, why is it dark at the top? did you soften the edges? are you goign to give it that flat-ish round-ish panel on the top as well?
i'm impressed you can work with such a small monitor
I've model the gnom guy with the big hand but it's not looking better than this model.
Yeah i soften the edge. No i'm not going for the round thing because this way it looks better.
I'm workin ot 14`` monitor it's nightmare but i can't afford something bigger. I'm poor... But that dose not make me worse i think
