I think the mouth should be a fair bit wider - judging by the reference pic it should be quite a bit wider than the vertical line to the nostrils.

You might want to increase the brow if you're modelling it to the reference pic shown.

Good stuff though

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thanx a lot.

UPDATE TIME:
i changed the whole shape of the head, i lowered his eyebrow, and made his mouth a bit wider.there is a big problem under his nostril that will be corrected next update.
i hope the shape of the head his right.Btw, there is no triangle on my model.
c&c are welcome.

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the mouth is too small in width,

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Ok. The mouth looks a lot better now. The eyes are also better where you lowered the brows. Of course the nose area is still off.

Not off in the way that it looks wrong. Just fix the wire so it smooths better.

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thanx a lot for both comment.
gohan:it looks off because i smoothed at level 1.

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Looks lovely now.

Although there is still 1 spot on each of the nostrils.

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yhea i know, i said that i would fix that next update.

i finally get rid of the nose probleme and here is the result.

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UPDATE:
i made some changes to his face and now i have two version and i dont know which one to take.

here is the first version:

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the second version:

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UPDATE TIME:
i played a little bit with the shape of the head, made his nostril bigger, lowered the distance btw the eyes and the nose, changed the shape of his eyes and added details near the eyes, and the mouth is higher too.i think he looks a lot better with my modifications.i found a picture of King Kong and it helped a lot.c&c are welcome!

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