That's some nice modelling, and damn fast too! As for the pose I'd make the head more horizontal. It'd make it look more like a predator out hunting imo
Liter is French for 'Gimme some ****ing cola before I break vous ****ing lips!"
Oh, one crit though, what you intended to make the folds of skin looks more like fat to me, but I might be wrong. Maybe make it look more like skin folds then chunks of fat.