Its a good effort. Add a few bevels to the edges of some areas to avoid things looking too CG...
Also its worth grabbing some ref off google to see how clothing hangs on a line, I think it should be more random..
Also check the lighting, as theres not much shadow on anything, the sun is behind everything so I'd have a look at putting some shadow back and not so much ambient/global illumination
Again, a good effort but a few tweaks and it will be even better
I like it. Warm with the splashes of blue and green. I agree with the need for bevels and some irregularity in general. The other thing that bugs me is the DoF, its creating a smudging effect on the leaves.
thanks for the reply guys. May I ask where do i need to apply the bevel thing exactly. And i have also added some dust effects so the leaves might look a bit washed out.
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