i think what makes it childish is...
the little flip the space ship does at about 0:18, it makes it seem so happy
the techno sounding music (the SFX works) i got nothing against techno it just seems slightly out of place. maybe find some overly dramatic music, something that builds up to a climax before the ship crashes through the title. i'm not sure where you'd find it because i can't think of anything right now
the bright colours (make them more dull? if you have a video post production software you should be able to change it easily, otherwise, by the sounds of things, don't worry about it)
yeah... the whole scene just seems overly happy
but then if that's what makes a b-movie a b-movie then it's all good
but yeah, i'd definately say the techno-ish music makes it seem childish
what version of maya are you using? and how did you do the AO?
that's a "Ch" pronounced as a "K"
Computer skills I should have:
Objective C, C#, Java, MEL. Python, C++, XML, JavaScript, XSLT, HTML, SQL, CSS, FXScript, Clips, SOAR, ActionScript, OpenGL, DirectX
Maya, XSI, Photoshop, AfterEffects, Motion, Illustrator, Flash, Swift3D
Last edited by Chirone; 21-05-2009 at 10:00 PM.